American Climber Dies on Mount Makalu
Introduction
An American woman named Shelley Johannesen died on May 11. She was climbing Mount Makalu in Nepal.
Main Body
Shelley reached the top of the mountain. Then, she walked down. A lot of snow fell on her. This is called an avalanche. She was very high up on the mountain. Doctors tried to help her, but she died from her injuries. Her body went to the city of Kathmandu. Shelley was with her partner, David Ashley, and two guides. David is very sad. He is talking to a doctor to feel better. Now, her family is planning a service in Nepal. Later, they will have a service in the United States.
Conclusion
Shelley reached the top of the mountain, but she died on the way down.
Learning
⏳ Time Travel: Now vs. Later
In this story, we see a clear jump from things happening right now to things that will happen in the future.
1. The Present (Right Now)
- "David is very sad."
- "He is talking to a doctor."
- Rule: Use is/am/are for feelings and things happening this second.
2. The Future (Later)
- "Her family is planning a service."
- "They will have a service."
- Rule: Use will for a promise or a plan that happens after today.
🗺️ Moving Words (Prepositions)
Notice how the writer describes where Shelley was using simple 'location' words:
- On the mountain (Touching the surface)
- To the city (Moving toward a place)
- In Nepal (Inside a country/area)
Quick Tip:
To = (Direction)
In = (Inside)